Thursday, December 9, 2021

Week 16 - Emma Gilmartin - P4 Feedback

 


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  1. Hi Emma!

    THis is looking so cool! I love your concept overall. Here are a couple suggestions I have:

    - I think we can fix the perspective overall. It would also be great to lower the horizon line and have us look up in perspective.

    - I also think you could push more forms, everything seems a bit flat in the background.

    - I also think for your background, you could actually simplify and diminish the size of the buildings, so that way you have room for your mountains. They feel squeezed in and they are also tangenting with the roof of the throne room.

    Hope this helps Emma! Let me know if you have any questions.

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